Ariana Valentine

I can honestly say that I will most likely never ever read another poem like this, but oh well, it was funny. And right npw I really need to laugh. ...

Thanks for reveiwing, it means a lot. I just want the people who call me friend, I'm not sure, but is there supposed to be an a between me and ...

I love it, I think that the length of the poem is great too. I don't think you should change "in" and "dim", they don't exactly ryhme like they could, ...

I Liked it, some actual puncuation would have been nice. And added more flow. It was good, really, the idea of it seemed kind of Cliche, but it made sense. ...

I love the title. I just love it. And I don't think that it matters that it's a little but longer then the adverage title, I can't think of anything ...

You call me a faker, And a liar too. You say I just want attention. So my emotions aren’t real. You’re right, I do fake my emotions, I lie about ...

Woah, that was good. It was very realistic, and how you had her like David, and having her have a best friend that seemed kind of crazy (my best friend ...

Dancing is a passion of mine as well. ^_^ Glad to hear about the boys in class actually showing up! I'm actually amazed you have boys in your dance class. ...

It was good, I like how there was a story line, even with as short as it was. I think you did alot of your formating right, I act and ...

Um... Hi, so I'm new here, my names Nicole, but I go by Ariana or Seth... basically I'll respond to anything. But I guess I'll tell you a little about ...